hi my name is Riley my school is yms model school. I live in Christchurch and I like.
Favourite place is the wine mak. And I am 7 I am ole most 8 son.
Tuesday, 18 September 2018
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Hi Riley! I love that your favourite place is the Waimak River, we always have heaps of fun there! :) I can't wait to read your next blog.
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Hi there Riley, Abby here from school.
ReplyDeleteI really like the way you said your school name and your favorite place.
Next time you could ask the teacher to check your spelling first.
How long did this take?
Don't forget to keep blogging.
Kind regards,
Abby.
hi it jayden i like how you tale as the adg
ReplyDeletehi riley i love your writing because you put your favret place to go waimak river from lewis
ReplyDeletehi riley it is jayden i like how you put your full stop in the rihgt plac from jayden
ReplyDeletenext time you will whant to make sense from jayden
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ReplyDeleteit is great to know that you love waimak
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